Chapter 71 of Core Beliefs. I've cleaned and polished the text, but it is still empty of emotion, revelation, and inspiration. It's all narrative, 3rd person omniscient telling, aka... boring.........
I'm grateful for the Beta Readers who have stepped forward. Daniel Book 5, Sarah Book 2 have champions, but poor CHUMP is sitting in a corner wondering why no one likes him. If you are interested in g
I am missing the boat on some of my stories and need outside eyes to help me. Read and make comments only on what you want and are comfortable with. Think of it as a way to get an early look at a stor
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