Emotionaless Omniscient All about Stuff

W.R. Golding

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Chapter 71 of Core Beliefs.

I've cleaned and polished the text, but it is still empty of emotion, revelation, and inspiration.

It's all narrative, 3rd person omniscient telling, aka... boring..........

I have to rip this chapter to pieces and find a human to live it.

This is a classic example of world building and all the different ways a writer can screw up a great plot.

So, if I posted this now, you could use it as an example what not to do, but I really do not wish to torture my readers.

This will take a bit.

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