Chapter 71 of Core Beliefs. I've cleaned and polished the text, but it is still empty of emotion, revelation, and inspiration. It's all narrative, 3rd person omniscient telling, aka... boring.......... I have to rip this chapter to pieces and find a human to live it. This is a classic example of world building and all the different ways a writer can screw up a great plot. So, if I posted this now, you could use it as an example what not to do, but I really do not wish to tort

I'm grateful for the Beta Readers who have stepped forward. Daniel Book 5, Sarah Book 2 have champions, but poor CHUMP is sitting in a corner wondering why no one likes him. If you are interested in getting on board, email me at wrgolding@wrgolding.com

I am missing the boat on some of my stories and need outside eyes to help me. Read and make comments only on what you want and are comfortable with. Think of it as a way to get an early look at a story before it is finished and published. As an incentive, you will get a free copy of the work and credit for helping make it a reality. Go ahead...Make my day! Email me at wrgolding@wrgolding.com if you would like to be a part of thi